This poem was made last October 31, 2007 and this is one of my favorite poems.It simply tells everyone what my heart can offer. I used to relate the planets of the solar system as a symbol of love, something you can offer to your love one. So sad that Pluto is not already a planet but only a planetoids now.But I still used include it as one of the planets coz I like how it represents distance. Nine, originally entitled nine planets, is something which tells everyone that every creation in the universe has a deep meaning that we have to value. everything can represent another if only we will go beyond their essence. I hope you will enjoy how I offered my love with the use of these mysterious creation of God, planets.
I’ll offer thee the burning Mercury My passion which lives patiently Amidst the firing cruelty Of surroundings visible infidelity.
I’ll take thee in the loveliness of Venus A world of beauty, I’ll introduce Love and charm will come to fuse And they will guide thee in life’s cruise.
I’ll share thee the blue, warm Earth Where life takes a meaningful breathe. Where love marks its birth A place I’ll never let thee hurt.
I’ll let you enjoy the braveness of Mars Will fight for love, from number of wars Where wounds have no place to leave scars Shielded with protection for unlimited hours.
I’ll give thee the huge wealthy Jupiter Great as my heart, to thee I offer Take it with care, my lovely holder Cause it loves to live with thee forever.
I’ll commit the promise of enchanting Saturn Wear its ring, a vow to earn Wrap the colors, I’ll give a turn A solemn love, my heart had learned.
I’ll share thee the delightful Uranus Heaven to thee’ I’ll gladly choose Where peace and sincerity will never lose A place free from awful bruise.
I’ll let thee sail the waves of Neptune Like the sea, it sings a charming tune Fast as it moves, its rhythm may swoon And when that time arrives, I’ll come soon.
I’ll promise thee, the song of Pluto Farthest may be, I’ll reach and go. No matter how tough, I’ll never forego A love that even death can’t withdraw.
I’ll offer thee, nine marks of love Full of mysteries that reign above. Even universe, my heart will have Thou are my sun, my planets hub.
